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**[ লেখক গল্পটির প্রথম ৩৩টা পার্ট বাংলিশে (মানে ইংরেজী অক্ষরে বাংলা লেখা) লিখেছেন; পরবর্তী আপডেটগুলো বাংলাতে লেখা (পেজ-৫ থেকে)। আমার হাতে বর্তমানে সময় নেয়, সময় পেলে গল্পটির বাংলিশ পার্টটুকু বাংলা অক্ষরে পোস্ট করে দিবনে। আর আমার কাছে গল্পটির ৮৮ পার্ট আছে ,পরবর্তী পার্টগুলো নেই; কারোর কাছে থাকলে দিয়ে সাহায্য করুন। ]**

Part 1
Aaj dudin holo Upen kaaje jay na, saradin dhore kamalar dudu gulo chokh diye gilte thake.
Kamala Upen er boro meye, boyos 24, kamalar ucchota 5 foot 8 inch, Upen er boyos 45, ucchota
5 foot 3 inch, besh gatta gotta peshibohul chehara upen er, onnodike bishal boro dhari magi shorir
kamalar, asole kamala or maa er moto chehara peyeche tai upen bete khato cheharar holeo kamalar
shorir ta bishal, kamalar dudu gulo khub lambate ar prochondo fola fola, kadh theke pray der foot dure kamalar dudur bonta navi chhueche, ar bontar kache dudu ta prochondo chhuchalo ,dekhte onekta mochar moto . Upen j grame thake sekhane akhono current pouchay ni. Ekhane meye bou ra blouse pore na, sarir achol ta diyei dudu dheke rakhe. Upen er bou mane kamalar maa sabita 6 mash aage mara gache, morar aage kamala ar choto meye jhumar biye diye gache, Choto bela thekei kamala ar jhuma maa er sathei beshi samoy katato. Upen karkhanay kaaje jeto ar beshikkhon bairei thakto tai meyeder sathe or serakom ghonishtho samporko kakhono gore otthe ni.Bou mara jaoar por upen er aka akai dukhe samoy katchilo karon upen er chodar ichha prochondo. Bou k saptahe 3-4 din pagoler moto chudto upen. Tai bou mara jaoar por upen prochondo dukhe din katachilo, hottat 1 saptaho aage kamala upen er bari ese hajir hoy. Kamala k prothome upen chintei
pare ni karon kamalar porone sada sari, kole akta 3 mash er meye. Kamala upen k dekhe dukre kede
utechilo, bolechile, "Baba tomar jamai ar nei, shoshur barir lok amake okhane thakte dilo na,tumi amake thakte debo to baba. "
 
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Part 2-
Kamalar katha sune sedin upen aki sathe dukhi ar khushi hoye gechilo, dukhi haoata savabik chilo kintu nijer moner govire akta khushir vaab kano chhoriye porechilo seta upen takhon bujhte pare ni, 5 din por upen seta bujte parlo. Ei grame Blouse porar chol nei bole kamala sudhu sari diyei nijer oi bishal lamba lau er moto dudu gulo k dheke rakhto, kintu hatar samoy dudu gulo thol thol kore edik odik dulto, tar opor kamala majhe majhei ghorer barandar ak kone bose nijer 3 masher meye puchki k dudh khaoato, kamalar gaa er rong chilo holdete farsha, tai acholer fak diye ar puchki k dudh khaoanor samoy or bishal dudu gulo dekhe dekhe ei 5 dine upen er obostha kharap hoye gechilo, Kamala k chodar jonno upen er mota dhon ta nije thekei khara hoye jachhilo jakhon takhon, Upen nijeke katobar bojhanor chesta korte laglo karon kamala or nijer meye, kintu upen er dhon kichutei or katha sunchilo na, 5 din por upen karkhanay kaaje na giye tthik korlo sara din dhore kamalar shorir ta chokh diye chete khabe.
 
Part 3 -
Pray 2 din dhore sakal sandhya dine raate sabsamoy upen kamalar dudur dike falfal kore takiye thekeche ,prothome kamala kichu mone koreni, kintu obostha akhon amon dariyeche j kamala upen k dekhlei nijer dudu gulo valo kore achol chapa dite shuru koreche, babar moti goti or akdom e subidhar thekche na, Ei 2 dine kamalar oi bishal lambate fola chhuchalo dudu dekhe dekhe upen er raater ghum ure gache, majhrateo akhon kamalar dudur chhobi upen er mone vese otthe, or ghum venge jay. Kamalar gud kamon habe ei kathata chinta kora matroi upen er dhon ta fule jhotka marte thake. Tritiyo din kaaje na giye upen motka mere baranday bose thake. Kamala jigyasa kore,
Kamala :"Baba kaaje jabe na? "
Upen :"Na re Kamu, shorir ta valo nei. "
Babar katha sune kamala ektu chintito hoy ,babar shorir kharap koreni to? sei sange ektu osyosti o hoy or, karon upen bari thaklei saradin dhore or dudur dike kamon falfal kore takiye thake. Ei 2 dine upen kheyal koreche j sandhyar samoy ghorer pichoner bot gach tar goray dhup jaliye dey kamala. Upen er duto matir ghor samne ektu baranda, upore khorer chal. Ghorer ashepashe kichuta jomi bivinno gach palay vorti. Lokjon hata cholar rasta onek dure. Rasta theke upen der bari te ki hochhe kichui dekha jay na.
 
Part 4 -
Upen lokkhyo koreche sandhyay bot gache dhup deoar aage kamala poroner patla sada sari ta ar saya ta chhere purano porishkar akta Lal pere sada sari pore ney. Ghorer vitor dorja diye kapor chare abar dhup deoa hoye gele dorja diyei saya ar sari ta pore ney. Upen aaj sandhya haoar ektu aage kamalar ghorer modhye dhuke galo, dekhlo puchki bichanay ghumachhe. Kamala bason dhute pukur ghate gache. Upen bichanar tolay aaste kore dhuke galo. Chador ta amon vabe tule dhorlo jate ghore keu ele dekha jay. Bason dhuye ese kamala ghore dhuklo ar hariken ta jalalo karon ondhokar hoye esechilo. Tarpor kamala ovyas moto kapor ta chharte laglo. Upen prochondo uttejito hoye uthlo. Kintu akta bishal vul kore boseche upen. Khat theke Chador ta amonvabe jhulche j kamalar hantu porjontoi dekha jachhe, khater tolay bason vorti tai nora chora korle awaj hote pare tachhara matro 2 haat durei kamala dariye kapor charche tai upen ar chador ta upore tulte parlo na. Kamala dhup dite chole galo . Upen ar samoy nosto na kore chador ta puro tule dilo jate ar dekhte kono asubidha na hoy. Dhup diye ese fire bichanar chador ta puro utthano dekhe kamalar ektu kamon laglo tarpor nijer moner vul vebe Lal pere sari ta chharte laglo. Sari ta jakhon puro khule kamala udol holo Upen akebare hatobombo hoye galo kamalar gud dekhe. Atoboro gud -Atoboro! !!bachha meyeder gud dekheche upen, sei guder theke ontoto 10 gun boro kamalar gud, pray upen er gota mathatar saman.
 
Part 5 -
Kamalar gud dekhe upen er mota dhon ta khara hoye uthlo, dhone haat deoar jonno upen haat baratei basoner awaj holo, ar sange sange kamala saya ta niye buke chepe dhore chechiye uthlo,
Kamala :"K..k..okhane.
Upen :"Ei. ..ami. .kamu. ."bolte bolte upen beriye elo
Kamala :"Baba. .tumi. .tumi ekhane ki korcho? "
Upen :"Kheter pashe akta gach laganor jonno kodal ta nite esechilam re kamu. "
Kamala bujte parlo je or baba mithya bolche kintu tabu kichu bolte parlo na. Choto bela thekei kamala ektu chapa swavaber. Tai keu kichu korle o chot kore kichu bolte parto na. Shamir mrityur por jakhon or deor oke aka peye jakhon takhon or dudu tipte shuru korlo takhon o kamala kauke kichu bolte parto na. Sheshe akdin jakhon Kamala k jor kore chudte chailo ar kamalar shoshur barir lok tthik sei samay ese porlo takhon kamala k ora tariye dilo. Kamala takhono kichu bolte pare ni.
 
Part 6-
Upen chole jetei kamala dorja ta bondho kore saya sari pore nilo. Puchki k ghum theke na tule ranna korte chole galo. Raat 9 tar samoy khaoa daoa kore ghumiye pore kamala ar otthe khub vore. Sandhya belay ranna kore khabar dhaka diye rakhe babar jonno karon upen ektu deri kore khay ar ektu deri kore ghum theke otthe. Pordin khub vore utthe kamala bansbagan e hagu korte galo. Kamalar swavab holo o bansbagan e jaoar samay sudhu akta saya buke bedhe jay ar hagu korte bosar aage saya ta khule kono dale tangiye rakhe. Sedin o amoni bose chilo, hottat o shukno pore thaka banspatar modhye karo haantar awaj pelo. Ektu ashchorjo hoye charidik takate laglo karon ei bansbagan tay o ar upen chhara keu ase na. Kamala vablo or baba to deri kore ghum theke otthe tahole saap taap naki. Ei chinta korechilo kamala ektu porei dekhte pelo pray 10 haat dure dariye ache upen ,porone sudhu akta chhoto gamcha .Asole kamalar dhari magi shorir ta chosar chinta korte korte upen er aajkal tthik moto ghum e hocche na, tai vorer dikei or ghum venge jay aaj Hottat upen kamala k bansbagan er dike jete dekhe. Kamalar bishal boro holdete farsha udol pitth ar bishal mota mota golakar thigh ar udol paa dekhe ak muhurter modhyei upen er dhon khara hoye jay. Upen taratari nijer jamakapor chhere akta gamcha pore bansbagan er dike egiye jay.
 
Part 7 -
Upen k dekhe kamala prochondo hatovombo hoye jay ar sange sange utthe dariye pasher dale jhuliye rakha saya ta niye nijer bishal lamba lamba lau er moto dudu gulo ar bishal boro fulko gud ta dhakar chesta kore,
Kamala :"Baba. .tumi. ."
Upen :"Ha re kamu aaj vorei khub hagu peye galo re. ..oki. .Tui utthli kano? "
Kamala :"Amar hoye gache. ."Aaste kore ei kathata bolei kamala taratari okhan theke chole elo.
Lajjay ar bishyoy kamala kichui vebe pachhilo na. Or baba or udol shorir ta dekhar jonno pagla kuttar moto khepe utteche ar eita kamala valo korei bujte parlo. Ar sotty bolte ki eta vabar sange sange kamala ter pelo or sara shorire akta kaam uttejona chhoriye porche. Edike kamala jakhon chole jachhilo takhon pichon theke kamalar udol dhamsa bishal pod ta dekhe upen er pray dom bondho hoye elo. Kamalar oi bishal hostinir moto shorir tar samne nijeke akta chhoto khato kuttar moto mone holo ar sab peshibohul kuttar e jamon thake upen er o serakom akta bishal mota dhon chilo. Upen tthik korlo ebar theke o roj vor belatei utthbe.
Pordin vorbela utthe upen kamalar ghore giye dekhlo je kamala ghore nei. Taratari upen gamcha ta porei bansbagan e galo kintu gota bansbagan ta tonno tonno kore khujeo upen kamalar dekha pelo na. Hotash hoye barir dike firche amon samoy pichoner pacha pukur tar ak kone je onek din aager toiry kora bansher machar paikhana ta ache setar niche jole jhup jhap kore awaj pete laglo. Purano holeo ei bansher machar paikhana ta akhono shakto chilo ar charidik theke plastic diye dhaka chilo, oboshyo kichu jaygay plastic chhire gechilo. Upen bujte parlo je nijer udol shorir ta upen er nojor theke dheke rakhtei kamala eta koreche. Upen akbar vablo je akhon ki kora jay,amon samay upen dekhte pelo kamala plastic er dorja tule beriye aasche, saya ta haat diye buke chepe dhore ache. Upen aajke ar kamalar samne galo na, akta gacher arale dariyei kamalar shorir ta chat te laglo. Kamala dhire dhire ghorer dike chole galo. Upen vabte laglo ki kora jay, hottat upen er mathay akta buddhi elo.
 
Part 8 -
Pordin vor haoar aagei ondhokar thakte thakte upen oi pukur er ak koner bansher machar kachhei akta gacher arale lukiye roilo ar kamalar jonno opekkha korte laglo. Kaam uttejonay upen er dhon ta fule fule utchilo. Ektu por vorer alo futle upen banspatay haantar awaj pelo. Kamala dhire dhire ese machay utthe plastic er dorja tule vitore dhuklo. Saya ta khule machar ak banshe jhuliye rakhtei upen sange sange nijer gamcha khule baire rekhe plastic er dorja tule vitore dhuklo. Upen k dekhe kamala voot dekhar moto chomke utthlo,kintu ato jore paikhana peyeche ar upen amon vebe beronor rasta aatke dariye ache je kamala beriye aaste parche na.Upen tthik ei buddhitai korechilo Ei jonnoi agerdin Hut theke prochur shak kine kamala k diye ranna koriyechilo. Shak khele beshi hagu hoy ar hagur chap o beshi thake eta upen jane. Kamala aantke utthe sange sange pichon fire dui haat diye nijer dudu ar gud dheke bollo ,

Kamala :"Baba .."kamalar katha shesh hote na diyei upen bollo,
Upen :"Amar o khub jore peyeche re kamu. .tai ar bansbagan porjonto jete parlam na, ekhanei chole elam. Tor o nischoi tai hoyeche. Chol dujone aksathe ekhanei hagi.
Upen er katha sune kamala chomke utthlo.
 
Part 9 -
Ghotonar akoshikatay kamala jamon chomke uttheche sei sange arekta bapar o ghoteche. Upen er theke pichon ferar aage kamalar nojor porechilo upen er ordhek khara dhoner opor karon upen puro ulongo hoyei dhukechilo. Eta kamalar akta durbolota. Jowan moroder mota dhon dekhle kamalar ar dik bidik hitahit gyan thake na .chodar jonno or mon pagol hoye otthe ar or gud theke nije thekei kaam rosh berote shuru kore. Or deorer dhon dekheo or oi obostha hoto ar tai kamala nijer deoar k nijer dudu tipte badha dite parto na. Aaj o tai holo, upen er dhon ta dekhe. Kintu nijer babar dhon dekheo je or ei obostha habe kamala vabte pare ni. Upen jakhon aksathe hagar katha bollo takhon kamalar nari mon chailo sange sange doure beriye jete kintu abar sange sange kamalar magi mon chailo okhanei theke jete.Tabu nijeke kichuta sangjato kore kamala bollo,
Kamala :"Baba ..Amar hoye jak tarpor tumi karo, akhon jao. ."
Upen :"Na re Kamu, ami ar chapte parchi na ",bolar sheshe jhop jhop kore jole awaj pelo kamala.
Kamala o ar parchilo na ,ebar kamala o shuru kore dilo. Kichukhon por dujoner e kaaj shesh holo. Kaaj shesh kore upen kichutei kamalar pichu chharlo na, kamala k badhyo hoyei upen er sathe pukur e giye aksathe pod dhute holo ar aksathei ghore firte holo. Ei gota samay ta upen falfal kore kamalar shorirer dike takiye chilo ar sobcheye aschorjer bapar holo kamala o majhe majhei archokhe upen ordho khara fola dhon ta dekhchilo. Upen er fola dhon ta dekhe kamala prochondo garom hoye jachhilo karon upen er dhon ta chilo ottadhik mota, pray duto lamba mota singapuri kala aksathe dori diye badhle jato mota habe temon chilo upen er dhon ta.
 
Pordin vor haoar agei ondhokare kamala utthe galo ar taratari bansher machar dike galo. Machar vitore dhuke kamala taratari nijer kaaj shuru korlo, kamala vablo taratari kaaj shesh kore baba asar agei chole jabe. Kintu sange sange Upen tthik kalker moto ulongo hoye vitore dhuklo. Kamala prochondo chomke galo ei ondhokare baba k dekhe. Upen jakhon vitore dhuklo takhon kamala chhor chhor kore mutchilo, Upen k dhukte dekhe kamala ato hatovombo hoye galo je phot kore utthe daralo ar or mut porao bondho hoye galo.Vitore dhuke aajke Upen amon vabe daralo jate kamala boste na pare.Upen k dekhei sange sange pichon fire nilo kamala ar tthik kamalar pichone pray gaa e gaa lagiye daralo Upen ar or bara ta fule khara hoye uthlo . Kamala upen er theke lamba haoay Upen er dhon ta tthik kamalar poder nich diye dhuke kamalar guder tolar ongshe ghosha lege kamalar samne diye beriye elo. Kamala aantke utthe nichu hoye dekhlo jano or guder tolay akta laora gojieche. Prochondo obak hoye pichon fire takatei Upen du haat bariye kamalar kadh duto dhore nilo. Bollo,

Upen :"Ei ondhokare kichui dekhte parchi na re kamu. Toke ektu dhori nahole machar bansher faake paa gole niche pore jabo. "
Kamala :"Na. .baba. .." ghotonar akoshikatay kamala kichui bolte parchilo na. Upen er mota fola laora ta kamalar nogno guder cheray ghosha dichhilo ar kamalar gud theke puch puch kore kaam rosh berote shuru kore dilo. Ar sange sange or abar mut jhora shuru hoye galo ar seta Upen er laora beye niche porte laglo. Mut jhora shesh hole kamala bujte parlo or hagu kora shesh ar habe na kintu tatokkhone Upen besh jore jore nijer bara ta agu pichu kore kamalar gude ghosha dite shuru kore dilo ar okhan theke chole asa uchit jeneo kamala kichutei chole aaste parlo na. Or shorir oke kichutei jete dilo na. Kamalar gud ei mota laorar aro ghosha chay. Dariye dariye kamala Upen er barar mota fola munditar ghosha khete laglo nijer gude tthik jamon madi kutta madda kuttar theke gud chatanor sukh ney. Kamalar gud theke puch puch kore kaam rosh beriye Upen er laoray makhamakhi hoye galo. Sange sange arekta ghotona ghotlo. Puchki k shesh dudh khaiechilo gatokal rate. Tai kamalar dudu duto dudhe vore chilo, Gude baray ei prochondo ghosha ghoshi te kamala atotai garom hoye uthlo je or dudur bonta gulo theke chuiye chuiye dudh berote shuru korlo.
 

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